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It's a great buildup, you don't lose interest at all even though it's "quiet." This shows me that you have the potential to reach the top of the NG charts, and I hope to see you there someday.

JimmyTheCaterpillar responds:

Ha! Maybe one day...

The bass rhythm is killer.. totally rave material. The melodies are awesome and the structure is good. There seems to be some clipping in the track.. watch out for that! My tracks used to clip ALL the freggin time but it was only until after I moved on to Ableton that I realized how much better it was if it doesnt clip. Which DAW do you use?

Another quick suggestion.. there seem to be some overlapping frequencies especially in the low register.. if it's not a sub or a kick, don't be afraid to cut out the low ends with a high-pass filter, it'll clean up the mix a lot.

Great work!!

Nice tune, really laid back groove, and theres enough variation in sounds to make it sound complete even at a bit over 2 min

jonesstoke responds:

Thanks for the comment pal glad ya liked it :)

Nice piano sound, great chords, right on! I really think this jazzy approach will be useful in the future!

jonesstoke responds:

haha thanks a bunch! glad you liked it :)

Cool synth arp effect with the drone underneath it. Even though you say it's a videogame song I consider this kind of thing to be completely acceptable outside of a videogame setting.

Acidicfriend responds:

thank you!
I consider it a video game song cause two of the four synths I used is from chipsound, a chiptune vsti.
so I kinda just thought it as something that has that kind of feel.

I dug this track, and if you extend it you could definitely show it to people and it would be legit. It might not be too hard to extend it seeing as you already have several sections in this 1 min sample. In particular, I really liked the funky off beat stuff you do in the beginning and the choice of sounds. I really think that "chill" vibe is something that is totally happening right now.

Acidicfriend responds:

thanks bro! I'm working on the track everyday so, soon it'll be done, the drop might be changed for something completely more chill.
atm, it's a bit out of place!
thanks for the review~ ! :)

Very interesting collections of tunes

great grooves, 8bit to the next level

sweeeeet

This reminds me of when I first started making electronic music! haha I used to make beats very similar to that.. really raw rockin stuff, awesome!

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